Evaluation 1-

Evaluiation 1

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Final Product

Rough Cut Feedback

This is my feedback from my class mates when I presented my rough cut of my magazine. There is some constructive criticisms on how I can improve my magazines layout and over all appearance. The general feedback was that the majority thought that my photo's were the strong element of my magazine. They liked the layout and reece of the photos. Many commented that they liked the colours that I have used throughout the magazine and agree that they connote the genre of music my magazine is about. The mast head has also being complemented. However, some ideas that my class mates had would be to add some stokes to my sell lines as they are difficult to see and also to perhaps add some brushes to dead space on the double page spread or a quotation. Another suggestion would be to add a background colour. I will look into these ideas and continue to develop my magazine in order to meet the deadline in five weeks. 

Rough Cuts